Book Editor, Writing Coach, Best-Selling Author

What do editors do? More important, what can your editor do for you?

This first in a series of posts is about substantive/developmental editing, which is my specialty.

Unless you are extraordinarily blessed, you probably are stronger as a writer in some areas than in others. A professional editor should not only point out your strengths and challenges, but also should help you triumph over your challenges by showing you how to expand your own strengths and talents into areas of the book that need them.

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THE SEVEN ELEMENTS OF A COMPELLING  STORY

1. WHAT DOES YOUR CHARACTER WANT? (a/k/a, THE GOAL)

Some examples of goals:

• Love, appreciation
• recognition
• the need to be understood
• defeat of an enemy
• basic human survival
• recovery from trauma
• closure after tragedy
• finding a reason to live
• finding a purpose
• making peace with the past
• triumph over adversity of any kind.

2. WHAT'S STOPPING HIM/HER FROM GETTING IT? (a/k/a CONFLICT):

• Conflict takes many forms: Oneself (we are our own worst enemy), other people, situations. 
• Infuse conflict into every scene.

3. WHY SHOULD YOUR READERS CARE ABOUT YOUR CHARACTER'S STRUGGLE? (a/k/a SYMPATHY)

• Reveal the truth about your hero, even if he doesn't know it himself.
• Give your characters layers and dimension—even villains are human beings; even heroes have flaws. 
• Go easy on the self-pity, even infuse humor if possible. 

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