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Whether you are a seasoned author or in the first stages of your first book, I'm here to help by: 

  • Guiding you through the process.
  • Providing honest, respectful, and constructive feedback.
  • Coaching you to go beyond what you thought was possible.
  • When I work with authors of fiction and memoir: I address such elements as: story and character arc, characters and character motivations, structure, clarity, ideas about how to show the action rather than tell it, dialogue, theme, tone, pacing, particularity, point of view, maintaining suspense, word choice, use of adjectives and adverbs, and many other substantive and stylistic possibilities.


  • When I work with authors of nonfiction: I address such elements as: concept, content, structure, style, tone, pacing, organization and delivery of information, persuasiveness, clarity, unique position in the marketplace, ability to reach target readers, biographical information about the author, and many other substantive and stylistic possibilities, including storytelling techniques for illustrating concepts. 


  • Comprehensive critiques for substance, structure, and style.
  • Built-in coaching in every written critique.
  • On-the-page editing (also called line-editing) for substance, structure, and style.
  • A combination of line-edit and critique when appropriate.
  • Providing what amounts to a detailed blueprint for your next draft.
  • Coaching you to stretch beyond what you thought you were capable of as a writer and storyteller.
  • Helping you develop and polish the concept, structure, content, and style of a book.
  • Query letters--writing and/or editing
  • Synopses--writing and/or editing
  • Book proposals--writing and/or editing
  • Author bios--writing and/or editing
  • Jacket/back-cover copy--writing and/or editing
  • Consulting on all aspects of publishing
  • Consulting on page-to-screen adaptation
  • Research
  • Ghost-writing
  • Web copywriting
  • Blogging


  • General fiction
  • Literary Fiction
  • Women's Fiction
  • Romance
  • Young Adult
  • Mystery
  • Suspense/thriller
  • Fantasy/science fiction
  • Memoir
  • Mind/body/spirit
  • Self-help
  • Business/investing/ finance
  • Health
  • How-to
  • Reference
  • Travel
  • Lifestyle
  • Science
  • Book-to-Screen Adaptations 


  • Wrote the pilot episode and series bible for a TV series based on three of my novels and can help you if you wish to adapt your own work.
  • Experienced, out-of-the box thinker in social media and author/book promotion and can teach you this skill set.
  • Experienced teacher and speaker. Have given writing workshops and talks and have been a panelist at such venues as writers' conferences, literary events, and in corporate environments, including Authors at Google, Los Angeles Times Festival of Books, and Vroman's Bookstore, Southern California's oldest and largest independent bookstore.
  • Workshops and talks include "Storytelling Magic," "Writing a Winning Book Proposal," "Show, Don't Tell: Breathing Life Into Your Novel or Memoirs," "Screenplay or Novel? Exploring Your Options," "Writing the Truth in Memoir," "Storytelling for Fiction Writers," "Storytelling for Nonfiction Writers," "Storytelling for Fiction and Nonfiction Writers," and "How to Get the Most Out of Your Freelance Editor."